I really enjoyed the ending of your video! It was a comical, unexpected twist to the traditional fairy tale. Good addition! I also liked your use of sound effects in your video. One way you could expand your fairy tale interpretation video is by adding a voice recording, either of yourself or someone else. I think that vocal expression can add so much to a poem or prose or any literary piece!
Unlike Jasmine, my FAVORITE part about your video was that you didn't use words. I felt like the music choice gave the video a certain tone that a voice over would have ruined.
One thing that could be improved was that sometimes it was hard to read the text (especially when it was over a picture). I'm not sure what the solution would be, but I'm just putting that out there.
I really liked the "silent film" sort of feel with the bouncy music in the background. I'm not sure if we're supposed to have narration or not, but I liked the fact that it didn't. High school kids probably get tired of having things read to them. I agree with Brianne about the text. I liked how you used the "Blew and blew and blew" with it going back and forth, but some of the other slides were hard to read. Good job though!
I also really liked the "silent film" aspect of the viedo. I thought the lack of words and narration made the sound effects more powerful. The sound effects were amazging. I agree with Tasha and Brianne, it was sometimes difficult to read the text when it was over the pictures. Awesome job!
Like the others, I liked the silent film aspect. Also, I felt the classical music added a dramatic, yet humorous effect. The wind sound effect added a great touch- nice job!
I really enjoyed the ending of your video! It was a comical, unexpected twist to the traditional fairy tale. Good addition! I also liked your use of sound effects in your video.
ReplyDeleteOne way you could expand your fairy tale interpretation video is by adding a voice recording, either of yourself or someone else. I think that vocal expression can add so much to a poem or prose or any literary piece!
Unlike Jasmine, my FAVORITE part about your video was that you didn't use words. I felt like the music choice gave the video a certain tone that a voice over would have ruined.
ReplyDeleteOne thing that could be improved was that sometimes it was hard to read the text (especially when it was over a picture). I'm not sure what the solution would be, but I'm just putting that out there.
Nice work!
I really liked the "silent film" sort of feel with the bouncy music in the background. I'm not sure if we're supposed to have narration or not, but I liked the fact that it didn't. High school kids probably get tired of having things read to them.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Brianne about the text. I liked how you used the "Blew and blew and blew" with it going back and forth, but some of the other slides were hard to read. Good job though!
I also really liked the "silent film" aspect of the viedo. I thought the lack of words and narration made the sound effects more powerful. The sound effects were amazging. I agree with Tasha and Brianne, it was sometimes difficult to read the text when it was over the pictures.
ReplyDeleteAwesome job!
Like the others, I liked the silent film aspect. Also, I felt the classical music added a dramatic, yet humorous effect. The wind sound effect added a great touch- nice job!
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